"W. Kiernan" wrote:
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> stacks insult atop insult; can she imagine us assholes (women spot us a
> mile off ya know) are so damn stupid we didn't know this already? That's
> what _we_ experience.
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> You want to do popular feminist politics you might keep that in mind.
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> Happy Valentine's day y'all, WDK - WKiernan at concentric.net
This is utterly unintelligible to me too. I suggest you begin all over again and lay out your point, whatever it is, in dull expository prose without the metaphorical flourishes, which fail to work.
Carrol