[lbo-talk] "Save Darfur": Evangelicals and Official "Jewish Leaders"

Andy F andy274 at gmail.com
Sat Apr 29 04:52:36 PDT 2006


On 4/28/06, Shane Mage <shmage at pipeline.com> wrote:
> Andy F wrote:
> "...for example...a multinational force to occupy Iraq, comprised of
> its neighbors..."
>
> With my editor's red pencil I write:
>
> It is permissible to say "a multinational force composed of forces
> contributed by its neighbors" or "a multinational force comprising
> forces contributed by its neighbors." "comprised of" is never acceptable.

This feels one step away from arguing by dictionary definition, but off we go:


>From m-w.com

comprise One entry found for comprise. Main Entry: com·prise Pronunciation: k&m-'prIz Function: transitive verb Inflected Form(s): com·prised; com·pris·ing Etymology: Middle English, from Middle French compris, past participle of comprendre, from Latin comprehendere 1 : to include especially within a particular scope <civilization as Lenin used the term would then certainly have comprised the changes that are now associated in our minds with "developed" rather than "developing" states -- Times Literary Supplement> 2 : to be made up of <a vast installation, comprising fifty buildings -- Jane Jacobs> 3 : COMPOSE, CONSTITUTE <a misconception as to what comprises a literary generation -- William Styron> <about 8 percent of our military forces are comprised of women -- Jimmy Carter> usage Although it has been in use since the late 18th century, sense 3 is still attacked as wrong. Why it has been singled out is not clear, but until comparatively recent times it was found chiefly in scientific or technical writing rather than belles lettres. Our current evidence shows a slight shift in usage: sense 3 is somewhat more frequent in recent literary use than the earlier senses. You should be aware, however, that if you use sense 3 you may be subject to criticism for doing so, and you may want to choose a safer synonym such as compose or make up.

-- Andy



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