[lbo-talk] Dumbing Down

Brian Charles Dauth magcomm at ix.netcom.com
Sun Oct 14 22:03:00 PDT 2007



> I remember once watching the 1938 film, "A Yank at
Oxford" on TV once and was struck how much more sparkling and witty the dialog of that film was compared with most contemporary film comedies. Of course it didn't hurt that much of the dialog for that film was written (uncredited) by F. Scott Fitzgerald, who was doing that sort of work at the time, while he was boozing himself to death.

Fitzgerald only worked on the treatment of that film. In fact, his only screenplay credit was for Frank Borzage's THREE COMRADES whose dialogue was completely re-written by its producer Joseph L. Mankiewicz. The film's star Margaret Sullanvan complained that she couldn't speak Fitzgerald's dialogue (a common complaint -- Fitzgerald's dialogue almost without exception was discarded because of its awkwardness when spoken. His dialogue reads much better than it performs).

Mankiewicz's re-write led to Fitzgerald's famous letter pleading for his importance as a writer, as pathetic a performance as ever happened. Mankiewicz quipped that he would be remembered as "the swine who rewrote F. Scott Fitzgerald." But thank goodness he did becasue he saved THREE COMRADES which is one of Borzage's greatest films at MGM.

As for A YANK AT OXFORD, looking at its complicated writing credits, my guess would be that it is George Oppenheimer who is responsible for whatever sparkle the dialogue posseses though Jack Conway's direction is only serviceable at best.

Brian



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