> I just completed a nearly final version of The Invisible Handcuffs of
> Capitalism: How Market Tyranny Stifles the Economy by Stunting
> Workers. I have put out earlier versions, but this one is very
> different. The second half is totally new.
>
> I would very much appreciate any comments. Thanks in advance.
>
> http://michaelperelman.wordpress.com/2009/03/07/request-for-comments-on-new-introduction-for-my-new-book/
>
Hi Michael,
Just a minor structural point: You might want to include slightly more detailed foreshadowing of the arguments in the book. That's what a lot of people look to introductions for, and I think it encourages further reading.
SA