> I would like to get some feedback on the essay at the link below
> (unfortunatly, you will need Microsoft Explorer to view this file)
That being the case, I won't read it. If you want to be taken seriously, at least use open formats.
Writing in Latin would be an arrogant affectation that would limit your audience and cause me to assume you were not even close to worth reading. Using a proprietary document format is even dumber and has the same effects.
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