Much better. Education is an opportunity that is there, but not mandatory. It is also a process a person can dip into and out of over the course of her life.
I think the communication part is important since it is a way to keep people involved and knowledgeable about their society even if they do not work.
I am not sure what kind of people possessing what types of "human natures" such a society would produce. But it seems to me that such an approach might be a step in the right direction.
Brian