[lbo-talk] Re: Haikus

joanna bujes joanna.bujes at sun.com
Thu May 1 15:28:55 PDT 2003

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At 02:54 PM 05/01/2003 -0700, you wrote:
> > In the sky, fluttering wings of doves?
> > No, clouds of contracts
> > Halliburton

I really like it, but that comma after "No" seems a little weak and made me misread it twice. Maybe an exclamation point after the "No"? Maybe a period?

Just a suggestion

Joanna

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